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June 12th, 2007, 09:58 AM
Hey everyone I just upgraded my image programs and decided to give a layout a whirl...let me know what you think pretty please...and dont be afraid to be honest if you hate it :surrender:

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=156735143

laars
June 12th, 2007, 10:22 AM
I think its too plain and the text on the extended network banner doesn't work well with it. it's nice for a first try

hotmonkee
June 12th, 2007, 10:42 AM
its not bad at all. if you're using brushes, then be careful cuz on the background you can see where it cuts off so you'll want to smooth it.

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June 12th, 2007, 11:13 AM
thx I just reup'd it, tried to smooth out the right edge of the bg, looks a little better.

Also changed the text on the extended network to be more readable and added some slight effects to the background of that.

Hopefully that helps it a little bit...any more feedback greatly appreciated.

offthedome
June 12th, 2007, 11:23 AM
I like it a lot. You used a good color, and (most of) the text is very readable, which is good.

I'd change the color of the words "Status" , "Zodiac Sign", etc, because it's hard for red-green colorblind people to read. Same holds for the orange text ... it has this annoying blurry effect, the one you get when you put #ff0000 letters on a #0000ff background.

hotmonkee
June 12th, 2007, 11:24 AM
still needs smoothing. lol but overall, the gen idea...looks good ;)

Sergio
June 12th, 2007, 02:53 PM
You should also change the css for the headings and links. The default is kind nasty especially with a pink background.

Edwin
June 12th, 2007, 03:31 PM
I like it but it needs more color and style to it and needs a better css :]

kirsten2491
June 20th, 2007, 02:13 PM
I like the grungy-ness of the actual picture. I think it would look better if you used dark colors to compliment the picture more. The silhouette is really nice, though.

Panic!
June 20th, 2007, 02:15 PM
It's great work for a first :)

Dale
June 20th, 2007, 02:19 PM
It looks great! Way better than my first layout did ROFL

jrw64
June 23rd, 2007, 05:28 PM
I think its good for the first try!

Graphic Addict
June 26th, 2007, 06:12 PM
NOT BAD for the first try at all!