Help me >_<

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http://i25.tinypic.com/6fno6x.gif

^ Self explanatory. Please tell me what I'm doing wrong :pinch:

Edit:// version 2

http://i25.tinypic.com/16ab09v.gif

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I don't really like that brush, it doesn't really match with the somewhat professional feel this layout gives off =/. And the main font is really cool but the "B" upsets me 'cause it really looks like a "D", but you can't really help that lol. Overall, it's good.

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tried another version, still can't seem to get it though :(