Review Lyrical-Desire.Com

[neelam007]

Okai id just like people to give a review of my website, which is -

www.lyrical-desire.com

I THINK i can handle the criticism! Lolz. Anyways just tell me what you like, any broken links etc.... and also what could i improve, looks wise and content wise.
Thanks x

Oh by the way some people say my sidebars are messed up :S Can someone tell me how to fix that plz x It looks fine for me but for some internet users they say its mixed up or summin x

[briankl]

The text is too light for your background. It's hard to read.

[neelam007]

The text is too light for your background. It's hard to read.

okai what colour text should i use do you think? the dark grey i have for the bold part and make the bold white instead? x

[spotlight-shure]

I am just wondering, i won advertising i believe it was permanent on your site for super sweet sixteen. (from kville). I could be wrong about it being permanent it might have been just a month but i know the link wasn't up long since once you opened the site, my link was gone.

No i don't own the site anymore but still it's the principal.

[sprinklesparkle]

Black or dark grey is always best for text.

[retro-bliss]

The header doesn't match the menu css a lot because the menu is only pink, blue and grey and the layout is rainbow coloured.

[neelam007]

I am just wondering, i won advertising i believe it was permanent on your site for super sweet sixteen. (from kville). I could be wrong about it being permanent it might have been just a month but i know the link wasn't up long since once you opened the site, my link was gone.

No i don't own the site anymore but still it's the principal.

hey yeh u did but when i tried to open your site it wouldnt work :/ i'll try again later as im on a comp wiv no FTP

[spotlight-shure]

Ok thanks. The layout looks great by the way. I noticed you change the layouts alot. I like the other one as well.

[neelam007]

The header doesn't match the menu css a lot because the menu is only pink, blue and grey and the layout is rainbow coloured.

um the colours are the same coz\ i used a gradient thingy i made with different colours, its just i think i made the layout one hardlight or summin and the h1 one screen x Anyways dw thanks x

[retro-bliss]

um the colours are the same coz\ i used a gradient thingy i made with different colours, its just i think i made the layout one hardlight or summin and the h1 one screen x Anyways dw thanks x
No, I mean since the layout header is rainbow you could have made the css rainbow coloured in the menu...

[neelam007]

ooh i get ya now! lol i might change the h1 part, or i might just make a new layout soon lol x

[Ammy]

The rainbow colours look great, I think the bg would be better if it was fixed, its a little too flashy when you're scrolling up and down.... and the header is really cute, just don't like the white blobby thingy in the middle, but other than that it looks good :)

[neelam007]

The rainbow colours look great, I think the bg would be better if it was fixed, its a little too flashy when you're scrolling up and down.... and the header is really cute, just don't like the white blobby thingy in the middle, but other than that it looks good :)

heya thanks x i done as you said and made the BG Fixed, lemme know if it looks better x i'll remember that for next time on the layout - no big white blobs in the middle! :P lol

[CharmRoyal]

The background looks good now that it's fixed.

Only thing I would suggest is to make your text a dark color, white is a bad choice!

[marshall_26]

a lot of gray other than that I think it looks good :)

[neelam007]

*Melissa - Oh yeh, doing that now lol I think i'll make the text a dark grey and the bold white instead x
[edit] I made it darker, does it look okai?

*Marshall_26 - I like dark colours :P Lol Thanks x

[neelam007]

Anymire reviews! really like some more x

[xo.Saz.xo]

Your left menu isnt aligned properly, it's halfway down the page.

[brittastic!]

Layout is cute, but the left menu is messed up in FF at least

[JrsDirectory]

Okay, I am sorry to say, but that is one of the ugliest sites I have ever been to. The template takes my eyes off the text. And the text is way to small, and doesn't take up the full page. It was a good try, but I would be bouncing to another site in no time from your site because it is not very professianal or clean. Sorry bout the negative opinion, but just being honest with you. You have a very nice domain that you could really do something nice though with. I would redesign everything, and get a professianal template made if I were you. Good luck!

[neelam007]

Okay, I am sorry to say, but that is one of the ugliest sites I have ever been to. The template takes my eyes off the text. And the text is way to small, and doesn't take up the full page. It was a good try, but I would be bouncing to another site in no time from your site because it is not very professianal or clean. Sorry bout the negative opinion, but just being honest with you. You have a very nice domain that you could really do something nice though with. I would redesign everything, and get a professianal template made if I were you. Good luck!
are you critising my site or my actual layout? because if its the layout then im gunna change that soon as i didnt like it as it was soo plain or if its my site then whats wrong with it? A lot of site have the same category of content as me so..

[MoreniTa]

I like it I think its simple and cute

[neds75]

I think you should add some more image in header, it look to empty!
Or maybe you plan to post ads in right section of your header?

[glittergirl15]

weee i love your background it looks so HQ!!!

[alex_ph]

the look of the main page is like that of a newspaper's. the equal look of the text makes the site less appealing. i suggest you make the text on the sidebars a bit larger. and make it bold (if it isnt bold yet)
and it would be much cooler if there's a little space in between the sidebars and the table on the center(?LOL i dnt know what its called eh) but i know its hard to do. just suggesting though =]

but overall very nice site =]

[rawrr]

This is most likely something with my computer (though I've never had this problem before), or it could be a pre-existing problem, but whenever I try to view your pages, nothing is displayed except for "Go back | Go forward Copyright To Lyrical-Desire.Com". (I hope this wasn't intentional and now I'm making myself look stupid...)

[Plush]

I like how the updates news is right there in front of your face when you come on the site. People like to see that you've been updating. Overall, it's a cute site. Good job!